Very good. I like the part about him speaking about not being assertive and being a perfectionist. I'm like that too. On the outside I feel confident but deep down I know I am definitely not. I don't have the balls to do anything or take any risks. I always tell myself that I don't give a shit what people think, to an extent, but I'm still pretty concious about what I do and say. I'm THAT GUY in your assignment group who wants everything to be perfect. I hate it when the clothes line is swinging. I hate it when their are odd pairs of items. I hate it when my paragraphing is a tad off. I hate it when something isn't straight. Something tells me that these things take over your life and just contribute to your stutter.