I wrote a story for writing prompts and someone suggested I post it here

I wrote a story for writing prompts and someone suggested I post it here You can check it out here: http://www.reddit.com/r/WritingPrompts/comments/2t2nv5/cw_are_you_scared_nno_good_i_have_no_time_for/cnv720v If this is inappropriate, my apologies.