Seems pretty good! Just remember that most people stutter on words that start with "S", like (ironically) "stutter". Also longer words is some harder, i think very few people sutter on words like "im" and "best". Also i feel there could be more to the introduction of Julio. Maybe after the opening line "Miss Williams quicly responded "You cold boy?", but no, Julio wasnt cold. ever since Julio was a baby..." <3 > After all, Monty knew that Julio was absolutely no different than him