My Pausing technique recording.

My Pausing technique recording. Hi guys. This is my pausing technique I told you about before. I basically pause after every word to slow down my rate of speech. Its kinda robotic but I try my best making it sound natural by keeping my upper body loose as possible. I'm also working more on maintaining good eye contact with people. I struggle with that alot. Just mind my rough voice...it sounds alot better in person trust me lol. Let me know your thoughts and what I should change if needed.